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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter  -explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months  -say how you work could be done while you are away -ask for his-her help in arranging it

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Dear sir, My name is Zannatul Firdaus, I am an employee of your
office
 and I am working in your Dhaka branch, Bangladesh. Today I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that, I want to do my
work
 from the head
office
 for half a year. To embark with, right now I am working in Dhaka, Bangladesh. I am an accountant, I had been working here for 5 years. Now, I want to
work
 in the head
office
, because I want to know the environment.
In addition
, I want to know my other colleagues. It will give me the opportunity to make myself more responsible towards my
work
.
Moreover
, I will be able to learn appropriate techniques.
Furthermore
, as I will be available at the main
office
 I will do my
work
 from there. I said my colleagues to send my mail what should I do.
Moreover
, in my absence, Mr Rohim will take my responsibility as I train him when he was new.
Thus
, he knows in which style I do my
work
.
However
, I would like to tell you that, please accept my request and please arrange my shifting for 6 months only. I will remember it in a long run. I hope you will understand my situation and give me permission. With regards, Zannatul Firdaus
Submitted by Zannatul Irin on

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