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The two tables below show statistics of workers of foreign and US birth in the United States last year. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show statistics of workers of foreign and US birth in the United States last year. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The below table highlights
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a
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different
range
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ranges
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 of the workforce in the US based on their origin over the past
Last
 year. The report consists of a total
statistic
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statistics
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 of the female and male teams. The First data shows the total figure of
an employed and unemployed teams
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an employed and unemployed team
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 of foreign origin
while
 the
second
 analysis was related to US nationality.
Firstly
, the table begins with data that provided the foreign employment status in the US
last
 year. The total figure of
workers
 in the workforce was 24,357
while
 the majority of
works
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 were dominated by males compared to females.
As a result
, the ratio of unemployment was higher in females
with
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 11.1%.
In addition
, it
had
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predicted that the most participated
workers
 were between the ages of 35-44 which
Also
 highlighted the lowest rate of 9.0 % of unemployment.
On the other hand
 the
second
 table analysis the figures for total
workers
 of US nationality over the
last
 year. The total
of
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the
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workforce was 129,533
workers
, among the total personnel
of
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67,610 was male and the remained
was
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 female. Male
workers
 were higher in all the aspects including employed, unemployed and even the rate of percentage. The range of the ages of the
workers
 was above the age of 16 years old,
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 the unemployment rate was more by 18.7%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, second, while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words workers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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