The two tables below show statistics of workers of foreign and US birth in the United States last year. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The below table highlights different
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the
range
of the workforce in the US based on their origin over the past Fix the agreement mistake
ranges
Last
year. The report consists of a total statistic
of the female and male teams. The First data shows the total figure of Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
an employed and unemployed teams
of foreign origin Correct the article-noun agreement
an employed and unemployed team
employed and unemployed teams
while
the second
analysis was related to US nationality.
Firstly
, the table begins with data that provided the foreign employment status in the US last
year. The total figure of workers
in the workforce was 24,357 while
the majority of works
were dominated by males compared to females. Fix the agreement mistake
work
As a result
, the ratio of unemployment was higher in females with
11.1%.
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, it had
predicted that the most participated Unnecessary verb
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workers
were between the ages of 35-44 which Also
highlighted the lowest rate of 9.0 % of unemployment.
On the other hand
the second
table analysis the figures for total workers
of US nationality over the last
year. The total of
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the
workforce was 129,533 Correct article usage
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workers
, among the total personnel of
67,610 was male and the remained Change preposition
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was
female. Male Correct subject-verb agreement
were
workers
were higher in all the aspects including employed, unemployed and even the rate of percentage. The range of the ages of the workers
was above the age of 16 years old,Moreover
the unemployment rate was more by 18.7%.Add a comma
,Moreover
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