One of your friends wants to apply for a job involving working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter of recommendation: How long you have known your friend Something about your friend personality Why you think your friend would make a good employee.

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Dear Sam, Hope you are doing well.I am writing
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letter to inform you regarding one of my best friends and colleagues,Anna.She
has
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apply
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applied for the post of senior software lead in your company
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week and I would like to recommend her to your company since I know both of you very well. I
know
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her for the past 15 years ,Me and Anna studied together during under graduation course after that we started our
career
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together at Infosys as junior developers. She was one of the best programmers at the junior level
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she is very passionate about her work . She pursued a good number of Microsoft certifications in the latest technology which proves that she is well aware of the latest coding techniques.Anna is a person with good interpersonal skills and she can adapt easily to any environment. I can assure you that she will be a good team player and an inspiring leader to her fellow workers. Hope my words helped you to get a good picture of my friend and I strongly recommend her to your organisation .Expecting positive feedback from you after the interview. Yours sincerely, Smitha
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task response
Ensure to provide specific examples of Anna's skills and achievements to strengthen your argument.
coherence and cohesion
Consider organizing the letter into more distinct paragraphs to improve the flow of ideas.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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