You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to bring to your notice I job at home and have a problem with a laptop because I use it for a recent job. My name is XYX and I am working in your office as a sails man and present time whole employees working in at home because government give some holidays all business related to Covid-19 problems.owners provide me with a laptop because my job depends on its equipment because I am doing totally deals online but now time it is showing a problem because It is during to task atomically off and sometimes It is hanging during to work . You know all businesses depend on

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was talking to other companies owner related to the task but it was off and I face big issues Another side I am too late about my duty because it is not working properly so I want please change It and I continue my work because it way more effective whole business. I hope you notice my letter and reply to me soon . I request again please change or repair the equipment. Your Truly

Varinderaujla9999

Feb 5, 2022

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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