It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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punishment to make

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young age.

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should apply discipline,

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think younger people need someone to

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to as an

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and

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to make their

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nice. With some discipline and motivation from the older, they will be a better person.

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not do her homework,

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makes her down and

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her habit. That's why

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punishment is

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behaviour

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of the

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of good

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and hear but

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they give

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or bad

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. So it is very important for them to have someone to

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to as their

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usually have

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attitude because they

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what they see and hear .

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environment

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to

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how

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to

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and

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is important to shape their

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them have a nice attitude