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Some people think that environmental problems are the responsibilities of worldwide governments and organizations. Others say that governments in each nation should solve their own problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In recent years, environmental issues have been increasingly considered as one of the main issues for all
countries
. Some environmentalists suggest worldwide
governments
 and enterprises are responsible for these
problems
 but others
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belive
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believe
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 the
governments
 in each country should tackle
this
 by themselves. Personally, I agree with the latter and will share my reason in the following. On the one hand,
the
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environmental
problems
 are caused by all humans. Not only do these circumstances happen
from
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 people’s daily lives, including producing garbage and using cars or other transportation, but all industries
also
 cause them. In the manufacturing industry, factories emit
high
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 amount of CO2 while, in the agriculture sector, many farmers use pesticides which lead to contaminated soil and water.
As a result
, all
governments
 and large organizations in the world should discuss and find solutions together.
On the other hand
, despite facing bad environments, each nation has different severe
problems
. These depend on many factors, including geography, politics and economics. In many agricultural
countries
, land degradation and deforestation are
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 serious issues, so their
governments
 focus on forest and agricultural area
coserveration
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conservation
.
However
, air pollution is more important in industrial
countries
. their
governments
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therefore
 try to decrease the figure of CO2
firstly
.
This
 is one key reason why each government should solve their own
problems
. In my opinion, all
countries
 have their own laws, so it would be better if they alleviate these circumstances by themselves. In spite of having some multilateral treaties to tackle these environmental situations, most
countries
 require internal
legislations
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legislation
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 to punish people in each country. Given the different legal systems and people’s backgrounds, the
governments
 can enforce different regulations and punishments for their citizens. In some
countries
, imprisonment is the most effective sanction. In other nations, fines and community services are more efficient.
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