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Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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There is no denying the fact that the current lifestyle suited a numerous amount of people,
however
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 it harmed lots of others . Considering the pressure and the drawbacks of
this
 modern life, I advocate individuals who have agreed with these thoughts.
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Firstly
, The most significant reason why I believe that
this
 current lifestyle is harmful to families, is their children requirements, in
this
 period of time youngsters are competitive to be the best in many ways,
such
 as purchasing a contemporary device to be better or equivalent with others, which will make an economic pressure on
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that will make an unpleasant feeling to the parents, that they want to equate their youngsters with the community.
Secondly
,
this
 high-speed life will press on people to join and keep up with the trends, which will make their lives challenging and tough,
hence
 will be more arguments in families that will lead to several alarming issues. To illustrate,
a
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recent research concluded that most of the divorce cases these days happened because of the nerve to keep up with the contemporary trends wanting to own overpriced belongings
such
 as brand bags and clothes.
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, I agree with the idea that the modern ways to live have an unacceptable impact on families and their relationships. ,
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 I admit that
this
 life had remarkable benefits on our lives but in my point of ,view the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
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