The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The three maps show the development that has taken place
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the
two
areas
;
Meadowside
Village
as well as
Fonton. Back in the day, precisely 1962, the
two
areas
were more isolated from one another. The
two
areas
had no transport between them, and both
areas
were smaller in
size
. Roughly
two
decades later, the
two
areas
have a transport system between
the
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two
. A road was built between the
two
areas
, which not only helps with transport between the
two
areas
,
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but
also
aids with business and trading. The
two
areas
have expanded in
size
, especially
Meadowside
village
almost
having
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tripled in
size
.
Meadowside
village
appears to have a larger road with a housing estate, leisure complex, and superstore, showing the increase in development.
Although
Fonton hasn't seemed to have an increase in development in 1985, it has still slightly expanded. In
present
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time, the
two
areas
expanded immensely, connecting one another.
Meadowside
village
now known as
Meadowside
suburbs has increased in
size
. The land connecting the
two
areas
now has a hotel, a train station and a business park. These changes help boom the business in these
areas
and strengthen the economy.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, areas, meadowside, village, size with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • rural area
  • expansion
  • infrastructure
  • commercial development
  • housing development
  • population growth
  • key landmarks
  • transformation
  • local community
  • economy
  • environmental impact
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