People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People
living in large cities have to come through lots of difficulties in everyday life. From lining up an endless line for coffee early in the morning to dealing with drunk people
on street at night. Not to mention the pollitions
; air , water and the land.
From the Correct your spelling
pollution
pollutions
time
they wake up till the time
they sleep, big cities people
have to overcome lots of problems. Especially, in the morning whether for those who eat at home or those who love shop
Fix the infinitive
to shop
coffee
, all of them have to deal with traffic or an endless line. Despite Change preposition
for coffee
of
already being late for work , they have to go through the crowd which take up Remove the preposition
apply
atleast
10 or more minutes. To Correct your spelling
at least
Correct your spelling
solve
slove
that problem, they have to leave the house way earlier than they have to which lead to less sleeping Correct your spelling
solve
time
then
eventually to health problems. Over
Change preposition
On
top
of that, when the Add an article
the top
time
came for them to go home from exhausting works, schools or universities, all of them have to go through same
or more desperate straits Correct article usage
the same
such
as delay public transportations more than usual, driving over speed
limit , noisy streets , etc. Even when the Add an article
the speed
time
they sleep, they have to compromise with loud parties , drunk people
, huge car sounds or bike
, etc. The solution to Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
this
problem was to sleep with ear plugs
and even eye cover patches if they live Correct your spelling
earplugs
in
Change preposition
on
1st
or 2nd floor with the bed near the glass windows. Correct article usage
the 1st
Instead
of going through all of these burdens, one could help them out and that is
the gonvernment
itself. Not by encouraging Correct your spelling
government
people
to move to regional towns and making it crowd , all the gonvernments
should take Correct your spelling
governments
government
example
of Singaporean Add an article
the example
an example
gonvernment
. The way he controlled the Correct your spelling
government
Correct your spelling
overflowing
over flowing
of Correct your spelling
overflowing
people
in street to the drunk people
at night. By making public transportation much cheaper and almost no delay, people
begin to use it more than their own car which lead
to Change the verb form
leads
less
cars on Change the quantifier
fewer
streets
.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
the streets
instead
of making people
more unconfortable
by ordering them to move to regional areas and making a Correct your spelling
uncomfortable
comfortable
peace
and beautiful place to pollute , Replace the word
peaceful
government
should change the way Add an article
the government
its
running the large cities and reduce problems.Replace the word
it's
it is
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