nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. what problems can lack of sleep cause? what can be done about lack of sleep?

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Recently , it has been observed , several individuals fail to get sufficient sleep and they suffer from sleep deprivation .I believe exploring the causes of
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can assist in finding a suitable solution to help resolve it. Sleep deprivation can lead to several health
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such
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as insomnia and heart
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.Recent
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stem from sleep deprivation .Since a vast number of
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have a heavy workload they find it difficult to catch up on sleeping .
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, they are more likely to be prone to
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.To address
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issue , they
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avoid staying up through the
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.getting adequate sleep
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a vital role in well-being. The widespread use of technologies
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as the internet and smartphones through the
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could partly account for that
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failed to get sufficient sleep.Due to the fact n vast number of
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are unaware
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the risks that insomnia can have,
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should be informed that using too much
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these things can have several adverse effects on their sleeping . They must be banned
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from using the internet through the
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. To conclude ,
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even though
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schedule and staying up through the
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contribute to several health
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, folks can remedy the situation. in my opinion getting sufficient sleep through
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night
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and banning
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of the internet
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in the right direction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Insomnia
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Sleep disorders
  • Sleep quality
  • Fatigue
  • Exhaustion
  • Restless
  • Restorative sleep
  • REM sleep
  • Circadian rhythm
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Napping
  • Sleep duration
  • Melatonin
  • Sleep-inducing
  • Drowsiness
  • Sleep disturbances
  • Obstructive sleep apnea
  • Snoring
  • Sleepwalking
  • Sleep talking
  • Shift work
  • Sleeping pills
  • Sleep aid
  • Relaxation techniques
  • Meditation
  • Deep breathing
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