The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea. What are the reason and solution?

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damaged seriously by human activities.

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result

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onland

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on land

and marine

animals

are becoming

indagment

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indignant

engagement

.

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essay will consider issues about becoming extinct rare

animals

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. The

first

problem is excess hunting because people prefer to kill

animals

for their business,

such

as shopping

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, eating and souvenirs for apartments. 

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poachers chase rare creatures and

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too much. 

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,  Tasmanian Tigers disappeared due to people's activities because their fur was valuable. The

second

problem is pollution

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because some factory lead line of work

don't

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 take care of the environment. Namely,

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 they carry out emissions into the air, rivers and soil.

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plant

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 discharge harmful substances into rivers and fish become died from

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. The solution to the above problems is to tighten the laws at the state level, thereby stopping the extermination of

animals

.

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, it is forbidden to hunt

animals

in the spring, since

this

period is

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for breeding for them. Organizations should develop an environmental policy and include in

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activities

such

as the breeding of juveniles. There are already organizations in Russia that are actively engaged in

this

,

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LUKOIL. LUKOIL has its own reserve, where they breed rare fish like sturgeon. And every year activists release it into the sea. In conclusion, if our government were to ban damage by nature,

such

as killing

animals

for themselves, the

animals

would get support and the opportunity to live today.

Otherwise

, severe consequences await us.