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One of your colleagues was in charge of organizing an annual executive conference, and he/she has been successful in doing it. You want to congratulate your colleague on that. Write a letter to this colleague. In your letter, • congratulate your colleague for successfully organizing the event • mention what you liked about it the most • say how much you would like him/her to organize other events as well

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Dear friend, How are you?I hope you are fine and yourself and you have not met for a long time because I moved to another country and you doing a job.
Last
 Sunday I was reading a magazine It is very good because into
this
 all types of job-related news and I was sawing your office article I am so happy because
this
 text is only for you because recently you went outside and attended a conference about duty and owners mention to your good work about it. I appreciate all movement because I like most things about your
this
 work
firstly
 your confidence level is so high and how you handle the crowd making a speech.you speak outstanding skills in business.I want to go with you
next
 conversation because I take some experience about It and I will most like your
this
 vocation. I hope your notice my massage arly and reply to me soon and give regards to your family. Your friend, XYX
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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