Some people believe that university education should focus on the skills of employment for the future. Others think that university education should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

With the development of the times, more and more people have the opportunity to

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in universities. Even though it is essential to

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on the

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of employment for the future, I still believe that university education should

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on

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. Some people argue that

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should

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on the

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of

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case, mastering solid professional

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makes it easier to find a job and it is beneficial to improve their practical ability.

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meanwhile , it is convenient for

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to enter

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society and better deal with the problems that they possibly face at work.

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view is based on the belief that

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can easily educate from universities and find a good job.

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cannot

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on the

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of employment if they cannot graduate with high marks smoothly.

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, it is important to make sure

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pay more attention to academic

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. In spite of

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, other people argue that university education should

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on academic

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because with more academic knowledge, it is easier to make achievements in their fields.

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, grades are necessary

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our society, and it is a stepping stone for

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to step into

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society. If someone has plenty of

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but does not have a good score, no one will know how excellent you are.

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but not least,

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is the premise of practice. Practice is blind without adequate guidance from theory. In conclusion, I would say that university education should

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on academic

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. It is vitally important to educate

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the student

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to consider what they really wanna in the future.