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You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another company Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months - Say how your work could be done while you are away - Ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Mr Aearon, I am writing
this
 letter to express my interest in getting a transfer for six months to the head office branch located in Sweden. I am keen on working in the head office branch since I love to acquire the knowledge of how they handle all the administration tasks and would like to get the exposure of the talented staff who worked from the beginning of the company. I hope
this
 will be beneficial for my career since once I come back I may handle all the loan related issues more precisely. During my absence, Tom is taking over my tasks and I have done a knowledge sharing with all the duties handled by me.
Nevertheless
, he has shown me a demonstration of what I have taught him throughout that session and I am confident that he will be able to handle my duties. So, I would like to request you to arrange
this
 opportunity by discussing it with the management and I would be really grateful. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Susitna Bandara
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