Many experts believe that our production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases is heating the atmosphere, and this could be very dangerous for human life The problems and the solutions about this

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air
polution
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pollution
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industrial
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the backbone for economics in every country, and it needs to operate as cheap as possible to provide affordable goods and services for people. If they
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friendly
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, it could increase the price and will affect to country and people economics.
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, electricity in Indonesia still
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source, the commodity is affordable for the industries but
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much
of
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carbon
dioxide
.
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pollution
generated from critical human activities. The solution
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the
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implementation
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of sustainable
energy
and transport.
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by the producer could
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by
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the usage of renewable
energy
such
as solar panels, water
energy
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the other side, the government around the world must encourage their people to
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public transport or electric car.
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Singapore
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government give more tax incentive for the community which
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car and
also
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the
problem
. In conclusion, for years
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and transportation
sector
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are the biggest producer of
carbon
dioxide
because they try to produce cheaper goods and services. The solution
of
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this
problem
is the massive implementation
electric
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car and
also
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the usage of fossil
energy
to renewable
energy
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