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the backbone for economics in every country, and it needs to operate as cheap as possible to provide affordable goods and services for people. If they

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, it could increase the price and will affect to country and people economics.

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, electricity in Indonesia still

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source, the commodity is affordable for the industries but

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of global warming

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generated from critical human activities. The solution

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of sustainable

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and transport.

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the usage of renewable

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as solar panels, water

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and wind turbine.

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the other side, the government around the world must encourage their people to

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public transport or electric car.

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government give more tax incentive for the community which

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promote the implementation of solar panels. That's why environmental friendly

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are the biggest producer of

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because they try to produce cheaper goods and services. The solution

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is the massive implementation

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the usage of fossil

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to renewable

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