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Band 2.5

Summerise the information, selecting and reporting

The bar chart describes information about the comparison of
teh
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the
 maximum
population
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 of
the
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Asian
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's elephants in seven nations in two
diferent
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different
 ;periods 1997 and 2004. Overall, it is clear that India had the maximum
population
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 of
Asian
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mammals
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 and Thailand and Malayasia, these both nation's elephant
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population
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populations
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 had been decreased from the given past period. While Laos had maintained the same amount of the
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mammals
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mammal's
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population
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. According to the graph illustrates, India had the most
populationn
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population
populations
 of
Asian
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's
elephant
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elephants
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, which is around 10,000 in 1997, but seven years later,
this
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 figure for reduced gradually by 2500. Myanmar had the
second
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-largest
population
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 of
Asian
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mammals
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 about 5100 in 1997, but in 2004,
this
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 was diminished by 300.
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,
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Malaysia
Malayasia
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in Malayasia
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 and Thailand, these both countries'
mammals
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 have been reduced halfly to compared previous periods, which is from 2700 to 1350 and from 4000 to 2000 respectively.
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Moreover
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 there was a slight decrease in Sri Lanka's elephant
population
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 to
compared
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the compared
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previous
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 period, which is 2700
an
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and
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 d2600 respectively.
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, Vietnam
also
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 had reduced slightly from the
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past
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pat
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past
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 year. Surprisingly, Cambodia had increased slightly from the past year,
withan
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with an
within
 average of 1300 to 1400 respectively. Laos has
maintain
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 the same
population
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, which is around 1200.

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