Some people think the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,many academics are thinking about their profit which comes from student's fees rather than
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the quality
education
systems.some individuals claim that academics have the privilege to turn scholars into knowledgeable citizens as well as well educated.I strongly accord with this
view.
To embark on,there are ample reasons why educational institutes ensure systematic behaviour for their students.firstly
,it will be helpful for getting jobs easily in the upcoming days,therefore
they need not struggle to search occupation
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as a result
,they might be in a higher position with decent
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a decent
secondly
,school is the main root of growing children's ability,if children schooling is not good enough then
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and position.moreover
,education
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for instance
,according to the education
department,many people do not have a proper posts
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a job
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because their study is not in an appropriate way,Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
thus
education
systems are very imperative to get cognitive skills.
On another hand,some institutes are always thinking about how to get profit instead
of giving proper education
to individuals,as a result
,many individuals might be lost their future in terms of jobless and lack of cognitive skills.furthermore
,having a good education
facilitates many opportunities without any worries.for example
, according to the survey,people who reside in foreign countries have a good occupation rather than people who inhabit in
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To conclude,these days,we can not survive without Correct article usage
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because technology has been increasing day by day,thus
schools should provide all facilities to students in terms of quality of education
and skills without expecting anything back in return.Submitted by anushachenna15 on
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