You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done

Dear sir, My name is vaani and I am writing

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letter to express my disappointment regarding the hotel you booked me to stay in while I was in California to attend

meeting

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Monday, when I was about to leave I forget my purse there. But it's all the important documents passport and IDs were in that. So I returned to the hotel after 10 minutes of leaving that place. I had talked with the receptionist about my lost purse but she wasn't really trying to do anything even I told her I need to catch up

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flight in an hour. Nobody was really listening to my thing

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I contacted the manager and he called housekeeping department to find if they found it. But I missed my flight because of that. I really wished if the receptionist has done that phone call to the housekeeping department I had not

spent

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more money on another flight. I really want you to look into

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problem and contact the hotel about it. I would like you to be careful while booking hotels for employees. Yours faithfully Vaani

vaniaulakh

Feb 12, 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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188 words

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