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Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion?

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It is true that climate change is getting more serious in the
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 few decades,
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, there are mixed views as to the
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 of fossil fuels. Some
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 believe communities have to
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alternative
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energy
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 sources
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 of fossil fuels. In my view, using fossil fuels should be accepted for various aspects. On the one hand, a lot of dust, ashes, wastes and chemicals are produced when
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 burn fossil fuel to produce
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. It is true that those kinds of products cause various environmental pollution,
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, air and water pollution.
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, many rivers around power
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 are contaminated.
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, sustainable energies are produced by nature,
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 as
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, water and sun,
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 of oils or coal,
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, any hazardous chemical products or wastes are not created.
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, if the local societies
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 more
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energy
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plants
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 for their electricity, their environments will be clear.
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, it is fine to
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 fossil fuel for planting
energy
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.
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 with, to produce
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energy
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, the communities have to make a lot of effort to change from current fossil fuel
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 to power
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 for sustainable
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.
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,
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 have to spend their money and time on making a
wind
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 generator and solar power plant.
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, it is true that there are a lot of limitations in location and for
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energy
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plants
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,
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, those generators cannot generate
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 in bad weather conditions.
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,
people
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 cannot build windmills in no
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 areas.
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,
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 might have some difficulties and limitations in producing
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. In conclusion, climate change is a serious problem.
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,
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 might get some advantages when they
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alternative
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energy
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.
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, I think there are some difficulties in producing
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 from solar,
wind
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 and water.

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