Woman and men are commonly seen as having different strength and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

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men

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women

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sets. The question is can people be excluded from a particular profession because of their

gender

? In

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I will discuss whether there is any truth behind the idea of ​​excluding

men

or

women

from the profession because of

gender

and I draw my opinion in the conclusion. In

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of one view , Some people strongly believe that a

gender

-based job orientation is generally prevalent .

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males or females seem to have an apparent instinct and physical capability to excel other sex in accomplishing their

jobs

.

For example

:

Women

seem to have a predominant role in medical services thanks to their natural instinct of motherhood . Meanwhile, there are some special

jobs

requiring

a great deal of

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physical strengths and persistence like construction

work

and logging which used to be done mainly by

men

because they have shown their extraordinary abilities to

work

under high pressure and long-lasting endurance . ‎‏

However

, some argue that it is not right to exclude males or females from certain

jobs

on the basis of their

gender

.

First

,

gender

equality may lead to unprecedented innovation in their

work

.

This

is because both genders have a unique way of thinking and

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for analyzing problems.

For example

, a software developer can produce a successful mobile shopping app where

women

spend most of their time shopping.

Furthermore

,

although

cooking food is likely to be considered one of the exclusively female

jobs

, the majority of restaurants employ male chefs. With that in mind,

men

have proven their worth in

this

kind of

work

due to their dedication and accuracy in

this

In conclusion, some

jobs

may be required to be exclusively

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such

as construction

work

.

However

, I believe that the innovation that

gender

equality brings to

jobs

is more important

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