Woman and men are commonly seen as having different strength and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?
There is no doubt that
men
and women
have Correct article usage
a variety
variety
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various
skill's
sets. The question is can people be excluded from a particular profession because of their Change preposition
of skill's
gender
? In this
article
I will discuss whether there is any truth behind the idea of excluding Add a comma
,article
men
or women
from the profession because of gender
and I draw my opinion in the conclusion.
In term
of one view , Some people strongly believe that a Fix the agreement mistake
terms
gender
-based job orientation is generally prevalent . main
reason Add an article
the main
given
to support Add the auxiliary verb
was given
this
support that is
males or females seem to have an apparent instinct and physical capability to excel other sex in accomplishing their jobs
. For example
: Women
seem to have a predominant role in medical services thanks to their natural instinct of motherhood . Meanwhile, there are some special jobs
requiring a great deal of
physical strengths and persistence like construction Change the quantifier
a lot of
many
plenty of
work
and logging which used to be done mainly by men
because they have shown their extraordinary abilities to work
under high pressure and long-lasting endurance .
However
, some argue that it is not right to exclude males or females from certain jobs
on the basis of their gender
. First
, gender
equality may lead to unprecedented innovation in their work
. This
is because both genders have a unique way of thinking and skill set
for analyzing problems. Correct your spelling
skillset
For example
, a software developer can produce a successful mobile shopping app where women
spend most of their time shopping. Furthermore
, although
cooking food is likely to be considered one of the exclusively female jobs
, the majority of restaurants employ male chefs. With that in mind, men
have proven their worth in this
kind of work
due to their dedication and accuracy in this
In conclusion, some jobs
may be required to be exclusively gender related
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gender-related
such
as construction work
. However
, I believe that the innovation that gender
equality brings to jobs
is more important..
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.
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