You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter

I am writing to you to look forward
joing
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joining
doing
a
part time
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part-time
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that you posted in
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the news
a news
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news paper
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newspaper
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. my name is ALI HUSSAIN from
kuwait
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Kuwait
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university
stuieded
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studied
nursing course, so I
hope
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tohope
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get
this
job because help my experience career and pay my house rent. I have 2 years
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experience
experince
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of experince
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assessment nursing, I give care for home care and I am available after 3:30 pm I am looking forward to
hear
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hearing
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from you. your
sencerly
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sincerely
. ALi
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