You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you faced What should be done

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To Whom

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may concern, I am the representor and shareholder of PaxEnergy company. I am writing

this

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letter to express my concern about the

hotel

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I am staying at. I was invited to reside a few nights at

hotel

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Lang Van while on my business trip to discuss

about

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opening an electricity manufacturing plant with our partner, company RenewSolution. As I am aware, you are responsible for coordinating the meeting as well as booking our accommodation. I would like you to know that I am facing some unexplainable troubles at the

hotel

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room I am staying at. I was woken up by some loud bang on my door late

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night

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when I opened the door, there was no one. I have

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observed weird light flickering in the bathroom as well as objects moving on their own. I reported

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to a

hotel

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worker and was told that several customers before me had

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experienced the same thing in the same room.

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is inconvenient for me as I really need to rest and relax to come into the meeting with good energy in the morning. I want to let you know I have requested to move to another room, on another floor. I suggest you do more research and be

more picky

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when choosing our hotels

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time. Sincerely, Nhi

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

223 words

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You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you faced What should be done

The Greeting

The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how It will look after redevelopment.

the money spent on space research has brought enormous benefits to mankind, but it could be more usefully applied. how far do you agree?

Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In some cities of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However in some other cities, bicycles are replacing cars. What are the reasons for these two developments? In your opinion, which one is better?

Some people believe that it is a good idea to continue to work at their old age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?