You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, • Let your landlord know that you will be leaving • Thank you landlord for his/her help • Tel him/her about your friend

Dear Mr Brown,
This
letter has been penned down to bring to your kind attention that I am shifting to Canda as I am offered a job there and they are expecting me to join on 1st March,
therefore
, I will be leaving your apartment
next
month. I want to sincerely thank you for all your help and assistance throughout my stay at your house. You are very kind-hearted and a gem of a person. Especially, I want to thank you for that day, when my electricity went off. My household chores were pending
moreover
I was having a business call.
However
, you acted as a saviour and repaired the connection. I really appreciate all your kind acts.
In addition
to
this
, I
also
want to say that my friend would like to rent your flat after me. She is
also
a very humble person like you. Please let me know your suggestion on
this
. Yours sincerely, Ammy Watson
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