More and more women have joined the work force in recent years. What reasons do women have to be more professionaly driven? What effects does this trend have on their families?

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women
role in society has changed and progressed a lot over the
last
decades. Nowadays, the domestic role of
women
is rarely observed due to
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recognition
recongnition
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of
iguality
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equality
quality
rights between genres and
women
incorporation in different areas of
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market. The following paragraphs will discuss the reasons
of
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women
visibility in
work spaces
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and its
effects
on their families. To start with the reasons
of
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this
new trend,
women
always
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had excellent abilities to develop different tasks.
However
, old fashioned
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beliefs
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believe
applied in the past
such
as
women
should stay at home and develop home chores or take care
about
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the children never recognised
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women's
women
womens
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abilities outside of homes. Thanks to that times
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changed and
societys
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society
society's
vision too,
women
could develop their role in
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society and show that there is no difference between genres developing specific tasks.
As a result
, nowadays we can see
women
occupying different high charges
such
as politics, president or business that in the past was
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impossible
to imagine. Another reason
of
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women
presence at
work
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is the expensive cost of
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. Families have so
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expenses to pay that are difficult to afford by only one person, so as result
the
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both family members have to
work
. From another angle, the
effects
of these changes can
also
vary. On the positive side,
women
participation in
work force
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makes the working environment much more diverse and integral. Female perspective and opinion can contribute and complement males opinions, which may assure an equilibrate and dynamic
work space
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.
Nonetheless
, some might think having
women
at
work
may bring adverse
effects
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such
as family
desintegration
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disintegration
or lack of
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children's
children
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education. To sum up, it is clear
to
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see that the increase
of
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women
involvement in
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labor
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market has been caused by social changes. And these can bring positive and negative
effects
to society.
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