Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

The purpose of education is to provide not only technological advancement but
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. Some people may find subjects other
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mundane and argue that only
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related topics should be taught at colleges. Though
science
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Advancement
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in
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and technology have improved our
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, during the boom of information
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many students were compelled to study computer-related courses to improve their chance in
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market. The prospect of getting a high
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profession. There are numerous subjects taught in universities and they all have their own importance in
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society. Each individual should be given an
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opportunity
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the subject of their choice. The world would be a dull place if all the people choose to follow in the same footstep.
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about
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is important to move forward and to avoid repeating mistakes.
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, historians provide us with information about the civilizations before us. These
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can be used in our
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society to some extent. In conclusion,
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subjects are
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society, I believe that each person has the right to choose their subject of
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interest
and that equal importance should be given to all.
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will pave way for a better future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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