You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organizer. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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missive to let you know that I am selected for the one-month training program in the UK and my employee ID is DM33972.

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,I am interested in the organiser role as I am always looking for a job that involves the betterment of society. I am curious to know the

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details of the event and the role of the organiser.So,that I can check my capabilities and could apply them

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,I require some information related to the event as well as some details about the qualities the company is looking for in their organiser.

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,I have run an NGO in my

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year internship

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it I have

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in which my role was to educate the poor children of the region and after completing my duties,the NGO awarded me with the best intern title. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Haman

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