You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter: describe the work you have been doing explain why you can no longer do this work recommend another person who is interested in the work

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Smith I hope you are doing great upon receiving

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letter. I am writing a letter to inform you that I will no longer continue the voluntary work that I've been doing for 2 years in our community. As of

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I am working as a staff nurse in the Intensive Care Unit area at Medical Mission Oriental Mindoro Hospital, it's a nearby hospital in our town. It's been a long time since I applied for

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position. Being an ICU nurse is my dream since I am a nursing student. The kind of duties I am experiencing now was so tough. Because our unit now is

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we're doing force overtime each day. I don't have enough time now to rest and if given a chance I would rather sleep than go somewhere else.

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, I want to recommend a friend of mine, her name is Samantha Grace a newly registered nurse. She is hardworking and willing to do a voluntary in our community. She is willing to do while she is waiting for her application to Canada. Thank you very much for having me in your community. Hoping to join again soon. Sincerely Yours, Mia Too

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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