These days many us prefer to throw damaged things away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time. Explain why you think this change has happened? What are the effects of this change in attitude?

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Life is about

changes

. And the lifestyle has changed in

past

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couple of decades. Earlier

people

use to

repair

old and faulty things,

however

now a days

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nowadays

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people

throw away the damaged items. In

this

essay

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we will discuss

about

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why these

changes

have happened and

effects

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their effects

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on the

attitude

? Why

these

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have these

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changes

has

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occured

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occurred

the

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society? The reason is

that earlier

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that earlier person

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people

where

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having limited excess to the resources and the earning was

comparitively

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comparatively

less whereas in present scenario individuals are earning well from there jobs or businesses which has enabled them to purchase more and easily.

The another

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factor is that in old times the person

need

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to go to

market

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or malls for buying stuff they need but in today's scene we can purchase any item from online websites starting from household to electronics items. The

last

factor is time and expenses of

repair

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individuals

has

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less time but have more money to spend so, they prefer to buy new versions of the thing rather than

repair

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this

few decades ago

people

have

panelty

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penalty

of time but less money

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therefore

they go for

repair

. All these

changes

in the lifestyle of the

people

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contributing in different

attitude

also

. The study from

central

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university says that

arround

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around

80%

individuals

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prefer to use

nad

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and

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throw mobile phones if they

accidentally broken

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broke

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it. Similar in household

arround

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around

65%

people

exchange or buy new stuff if old one got damaged.

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example

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our

parents

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parent's

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attitude

was preserve

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the equipment as long as possible

that is

why the

attitude

was called

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apply

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preserving but due to throwing or changing

thing

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things

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the

attitude

is called

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throw away

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throw-away

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attitude

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