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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.

#facebook #friend #country #news #item
Dear Sara, I am so sorry I haven't written to you for so long. I have participated in a running competition which was for abandoned children. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you about
this
 competition. Unfortunately, Iran has been dealing with unpleasant situations in foster houses for the
last
 month. Many children who breed in these houses suffer from malnutrition and lack of enough facilities.
Hence
, the governments organized a running competition and each competitor had to donate money to qualify for running. It was a great event since millions of dollars were collected at the event to cover all the expenses for the infrastructure of fosters. I was lucky enough to not only run for children but
also
 be a member of the team to organize
this
 process.
Finally
, I like to inform you about the upcoming event which is going to be held on 14th September 2022. You make me happy if you and your friends can join us. Love, Dorna
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