Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

Many
people
claim that to try new
things
is useful to improve our life experience and they like to
visit
new
places
which they
never
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been
, some
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people
disagree to
visit
new
places
and eating new types of food.
Therefore
we will discuss these attitudes in
this
essay.
Firstly
, as far as I am concerned
to try
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new
things
is helps us to improve our mood and helps make it fun
for example
, many
people
love to
visit
the
places
which they interested in and if their dream will come true they will be absolutely happy. As I mentioned before
to try
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new
things
helps us to improve our life experience, I think more
people
love to assay new
things
than
people
who dislike
it
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.
Secondly
, as we know there are
people
who prefer to keep doing
things
they are familiar with. I consider those
people
a little lazy or coward who dislike
to try
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new
things
because they might afraid
of
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to try new
things
especially to eat new types of food, they might think that new types of food bring them harm and their health.
Unfortunately
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there are lazy
people
between us. They always do the same
things
, eat the same foods, the same
places
they
visit
and they are not interested in
to try
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trying
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new
things
. They are lazy to go
new
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to new
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places
or maybe they are afraid of changes.
Thirdly
it
depend
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on
people
. At the whim of
everyone
, who wants
experimentelize
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experimentalize
new
things
let him
to
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apply
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do it. And who prefer
do
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to
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keep doing
things
let him
to
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keep
everyone
has right of residence. But
everyone
should do experiments in their life at least once a month. In
summary
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to try new
things
is better and more exciting than to keep doing
things
.
Everyone
should do experiments and
to
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apply
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try new
things
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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