Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

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people
who like to sample new things as well as some
people
who choose to keep doing things
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they are familiar
.
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In the
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many
people
love to travel, recognize new places and new countries. They do adore
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novel
people
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friends in different countries. These
people
have nice social skills and frank character,
therefore
, it is easier for them to communicate. These
people
are always ready for change.
For example
, they are not afraid to give up everything and go somewhere.
Furthermore
,
such
people
get started a new hobby easily, so they get much life experience. They spend a lot of energy but they get
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less than that. They just live various lives.
Besides
, one should not forget about
people
who do not like change. They do not like new acquaintances and new places because they are not comfortable there and it is hard for them to get used to something new. They have
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old friends and things who give them pleasure. Some of them are afraid to make new acquaintances, but there are
people
who just do not want to do it.
This
is not bad, they just like to feel stable in life. Both types of
people
do what they like and what makes them happy. Just some
people
are more active and some are less. It depends on their characters and outlook on life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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