Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

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,
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world
there are two groups of
people
. The
first
group's community prefer to change their lifestyle
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going
another
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city,country and tasting foreign foods and meals. The
second
group's nation just keep doing the same thing all their life without any changes The
first
one
enjoy
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travelling abroad,going to historical places and seeing memorable monuments. Because they are more curious about these kinds of activities. Some
people
cannot stand without travelling. They want to be
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countries at least once a month. If they travel to cities which they enjoy going
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just relax and feel more energetic as they are born as a new child. And
also
these kinds of
people
's
attitude
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to foreigners are good than other
people
. As they visit abroad frequently,they make new friends, which may increase their social skills and outlook.
Consequently
,they become well-informed about the
world
and maybe owners of the good horizons. The
second
group's
people
do not prefer to visit any other cities,tasting foreign foods,meals. And they are not interested in a foreign country's traditions and culture. They want to stay in their hometown. Motherland is the perfect area to live comfortable for them. They may be afraid of tasting foods which they have never eaten because the food
may be
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not useful for their health and visiting another city which they have never been
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dangerous for them,that's why they prefer to do the same things which are familiar with. But
on the other hand
, if one wants to visit or travel abroad, they must not have financial problems. At the moment all over the
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nearly 15
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of
people
afford to go abroad. If a person goes
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land not keep doing one activity, they may increase their attitude to the
world
. If someone cannot afford to go abroad,
this
is the perfect way to enjoy their lives to see their own national places,and
this
way is more beneficial for them. To sum up, it depends on
people
's special skills. If they afford to go abroad, they may go and enjoy their lives. Unless someone can, they
also
may relax just staying in their own town with their close relatives.
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  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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