In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
These days, many businesses occasionally insist on presenting their produced items as new ones.
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way of marketing is somehow beneficial for companies in terms of boosting their sales. Linking Words
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, I personally take the view that it is positive progress.
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in the streets to nowadays well-known advertisements for a specific brand. More importantly, since attracting much attention among individuals who are missing in the middle of their hustling days is extremely difficult, businesses should do their best in order to draw attention to a new and different product. Use synonyms
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, Samsung is establishing a research-based company in the Linking Words
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to develop its new B22 series, which has up to five cameras. In fact, they are planning to encourage everyone to buy the newest product.
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