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Some people think that universities should provide gradates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.

#people #universities #gradates #skills #workplace #function #university #access #sake #course #employer
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society develops, people are attaching
the
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importance to
knowledge
.
Nonetheless
,
knowledge
 is divided into practical and academic ones. Views are
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 into 2 stances which one side thinks universities ought to provide graduates with practical
skills
 and
knowledge
 required in the workplace whereas another side insists the true function of
an
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 university, which is to give access to
knowledge
. Given the rapid growth of technology, I hold the standpoint that immersing practical
knowledge
 to
gradates
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 is the main function of
an
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 university. One point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that being equipped with practical
skills
 and
knowledge
 helps graduates to obtain job offers drastically. In the era of Metaverse,
which
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 technology is changing
every-day
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, there is always
tight
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 time frame for people to get things done or to fix issues. In reality, when college students are competing for an internship position, chances are that the skillset requirements are actually not low, which they need more functional
knowledge
 so as to gain an internship opportunity, not to mention when job hunting in the society after graduating.
However
, it is an irrefutable fact that education itself coaches students analytical
skills
 and logical thinking. Many students may argue that those theories and models taught at school
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 apply to the real world. The throw of logic and analytical
skills
 they obtained from learning
those
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knowledge
,
however
, are actually influencing how they think and act in
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long-term
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. All in all, combining both actual work-related
skills
 and the soft
skills
 brought by
purely
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knowledge
 can foster the pillar of the society for the sake of the society’s sustainable development.
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