Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Nowadays, there are more and more

crimes

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appearing in big cities and even in the countryside, there are a lot of reasons for them to appear.

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, there are still some solutions for the crime to reduce the percentage. The reason and the solution will be shown in the essay.

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, the society

is continue

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developing day

to day

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today

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, so that it

lead

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to the cost for the food or necessary items are going up too, many people can not afford for those, so they have to

steel

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some things to help them or evenly robber just to help them survive, some

crimes

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know they

were serve

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the punishment. The main reason is they can not have a job, they will not have money to buy food for clothes, if they do not have anything to survive, they will commit

crimes

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. We can not avoid some people having the things about steel or robbing the bank to make rich. So committing again is really easy.

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, about the solution, there might be some,

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some employers still making more and more jobs for them to join and they can earn the money to help their life, there still more new employers create all kinds of jobs.

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, some countries do some incredible thinking

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as Norway, they create the jail for everyone who wants, with very good remuneration, so that the percentage in Norway is really low, though

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is so crazy.

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solutions may help

crimes

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join

the

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society.

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, the

crimes

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after serving the

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punishment can return to being a crime

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for

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a lot of

reason

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, despite creating many more jobs by employers, and some might join with society to become honest citizens.