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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In
this
 contemporary era, travelling becomes so easy and cheap that anyone can travel and visit another country. Some
people
 think that international tourism cause problems among different
natinalities
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nationalities
,
however
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,however
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 I tend to disagree with
this
 thought. In
this
 essay, I will discuss my opinion with a few examples. To understand the actual problem, we have to think about the reason
of
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 the question.
Instead
 of
acceptting
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accepting
 the different perspectives, we started disliking other peoples cultures. If we talk about the
people
 who travel a lot, they actually enjoy exploring new places, traditions, food and culture.
If
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 fact, I strongly believe, linking tourism with
the
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national problems is non-
relavent
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relevant
. Many good things we learn from different nationalities.
For example
, the
people
 in Japan are most organized in
term
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terms
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 of living their day to day life. They are punctual,
frendly
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friendly
 and respectful. Anyone who visits Japan can
definately
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definitely
 learn many things. The problem
start
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 when we try to
judge
 other
countrie's
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countries
country's
people
. We
compair
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compare
 our life with others and start making a point.
People
are
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who are
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 not willing to understand and do not have
open
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an open
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 mindset are tends to criticise other nationalities.
For example
, most
people
 in china eat non-veg food and some of their food items even include insects. Many
people
 try to
judge
 them on what they eat. we should not
judge
 anyone depending on what they eat or what they wear. To sum up, being open to
understand
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understanding
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 and
accept
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accepting
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 the different cultures and the way of living, can change the perspectives. In
context
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 of my views, experience and the points I
coverd
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covered
cover
 in aforesaid paragraphs, I disagree that the
internativnal
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international
 tourism
create
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creates
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 problems. We should always remember that "Do not
judge
 a book by
it's
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its
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 cover".
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