write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays the
garbage
all over the
world
is increasing.
This
is mainly because of an increased
number of
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population many population
people
and no discipline. Many
people
just throw their
garbage
everywhere like candy wrap, they look small but if you imagined all over the
world
one
people
throwing, It will become big
rubbish
. Many
people
do not think good in the environment they don`t care what will be the cause. Many governments trying to solve
this
problem or lessen the
garbage
by separating the biodegradable and non-biodegradable. Some countries practising
this
already like Singapore, and Japan
they
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are making the
garbage
for electricity to help the community and save more money. In some states the
plastic
bottles
they
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make bricks, some biodegradable they make fertilizer for their plants. And they should have the bin
garbage
colour code like
for example
blue for paper and cardboard, green for
plastic
bottles, black for glass, yellow for
plastic
bags and red for cans and many more. It will help the
rubbish
collector to know what is in the
garbage
. If it possible
also
to help other communities to established or share the knowledge of how to take all
plastic
to make
a
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bricks . But
this
is not enough, they should implement all over the
world
that they will use in the supermarket the re-usable bag and in the restaurant or fast food no using of
plastic
straw they can bring and use the re-usable straw if they want. In
this
, the conclusion we will have
discipline
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to throw where it could be our wasted. And support other countries for
this
program. The unity all over the
world
will make our dream or achieved the goal to decrease the
rubbish
all around the
world
.
This
will be a good help to lessen the
rubbish
or it could be possible that all waste will recycle and used for something better to our mother earth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • sustainability
  • landfill
  • recycle
  • single-use products
  • waste management
  • regulatory measures
  • composting
  • biodegradable
  • environmental impact
  • incentives
  • sustainable practices
  • circular economy
  • zero waste
  • responsibility
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