You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned the shop say what you would like the manager to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I recently bought a 60 qt
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kitchen equipment was on sale for half the price and even though there was no warranty, I bought it anyway for Linking Words
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, the coated layer started to peel off after a number of washes. Linking Words
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electricity going through it but the equipment reversed to stand-by Change the verb form
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worker who answered my call was impatient when I tried to explain my Use synonyms
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purchase and feel like I have paid my hard-earned money for Linking Words
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junk. I have no problem with my frying basket coat layer peeling after a short amount of time as I am aware I bought the product for just half the price. Remove the article
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whole thing is when the Linking Words
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I would like the manager to look into Correct your spelling
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matter and work out an ethical solution for both parties. I need my Linking Words
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, it is not worth my money. I would like the Replace the word
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a refund. I sincerely hope the manager can handle Change the verb form
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matter properly so we can gladly continue to do business with each other.
Looking forward to your Linking Words
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,
NhiCorrect your spelling
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite