You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned the shop say what you would like the manager to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I recently bought a 60 qt
air
fryer
at your
store
.
This
kitchen equipment was on sale for half the price and even though there was no warranty, I bought it anyway for
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such
a hot sale price. Little did I know, the product break down after a few weeks. For that reason, I am writing
this
to you to express my concern.
Firstly
, the coated layer started to peel off after a number of washes.
Secondly
,
this
air
fryer
usually
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off for no reason
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through cooking. There
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electricity going through it but the equipment reversed to stand-by
instead
of
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cooking. The
store
worker who answered my call was impatient when I tried to explain my
sistuation
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situation
, I
guees
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guess
because there is no warranty on the product. I am upset with
this
purchase and feel like I have paid my hard-earned money for
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junk. I have no problem with my frying basket coat layer peeling after a short amount of time as I am aware I bought the product for just half the price.
However
, the tipping point of
this
whole thing is when the
fryer
stop working properly after just three weeks. The
store
employee has denied my request for help on the phone and I am
desperated
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desperate
. I would like the manager to look into
this
matter and work out an ethical solution for both parties. I need my
air
fryer
fixed because
this
cooking device was brand new and sealed in the box when I
first
bought it. It was
dissapointing
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disappointing
to encounter
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problem after
such
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, it is not worth my money. I would like the
store
to either
fix
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the
air
fryer
or I sadly have to proceed to
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a refund. I sincerely hope the manager can handle
this
matter properly so we can gladly continue to do business with each other. Looking forward to your
respone
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response
, Nhi
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