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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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 due to the fact of the modern well-known term of YOLO or you only live once. Normally young generations today are much fierce and dare-devil on kinds of stuff they want to involved too. Living with the thread is almost the number one focus of society nowadays. As peer pressure and social media influence can greatly push crowds to do
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 as most individuals want something they can post and boast about on social media platforms. Another is the common persona of a person to be risk-takers. As a common saying, one usually does not forecast two major things, accident, and death.
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, when the population what to know-how the thrill, they repeatedly forget the counterpart of it. They regularly forgot the rules, consequences, and aftermath of things, they want to feel and will do to others. During the activity, they generally forget to be vigilant and persistent in taking control, as it will come with great knowledge, practice, and determination. One good example of
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 if they engaged in careful planning and training, accidents and death could be greatly prevented. All in all, it boils down to the person's perspective of what danger is. At the end of the day, our choices and decisions will always have a counter-reactive of future lives.
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