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Mrs. Barette, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs. Barette. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not available

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Dear Mrs Barette I hope you are doing good upon receiving
this
 letter. As I walking back home from work, I saw your advertisement posted near to our health
center
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. I am applying as your helper during summer break as it is our vacation from school.
However
, I cannot do it every day as I have a review class twice a week. My mother taught me a lot about household chores during my childhood. So you don't have to worry because I can do anything you want me to do. As a matter of fact, I did some summer work in one of the restaurants as a cleaner.
In addition
 to
this
, I was
also
 awarded as the best cleaner of the month during that summer work. I am fond of cleaning houses and cooking a variety of dishes. Maybe because I taught all these things as early as 7 years old.
That is
 why I am always happy and fulfilled whenever I see one house
that is
 neat and well organized.
On the other hand
, as
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I have said I am not available every day because of my review class twice a week. I would like you to know that I am available during weekdays and sadly I am not free during weekends. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Raiza Tolentino
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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