Human activities over the period of time have increased global warming. What are the primary causes? What solutions can you suggest?

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Well, it is a common issue
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in today's world that global warming is
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due to human interference. The main reasons for it
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over consumption
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of coal and
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and degradation. Every problem has
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so, it can be tackled by aware
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to save
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the environment
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and clean
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natural resources like
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wild life
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and
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.
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, the
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of coal and
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for doing works should be stopped which can help to decrease the
pollution
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in the environment. Most of
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pollution
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spread in
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because of vehicles so,
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need to reduce the
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of cars and bikes.
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made
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rule to reduce the traffic in that way they decreased the
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decline the cutting of trees for their satisfaction. It is recorded that
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of
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to earn some money. According to
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, it shows that 70%
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wild life
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destroyed because of wood and animals skull and leather
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solved by society and lawmakers initiative if they work together they can save the world for upcoming generations. If
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makes any law for
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well
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fare of society they should obey that rule.
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of coal and
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. They need to find alternative ways like
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the
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of natural gas
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. In conclusion,
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people
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are responsible for creating
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in the world, if they take their duties to clean the environment to stay healthy by decreasing the
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of coal and
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stop cutting plants
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will automatically decrease .
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

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  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
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