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Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases. This is one reason that people are living longer lives now than they did in the past. Discuss the effects this might have on society.

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Current modern medicine has brought each individual an
oppoturnity
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opportunity
 to live
longer
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life
. Drugs have been manufactured to cure many common diseases
also
 to alleviate the variety of
archonic
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chronic
 conditions.
This
 has obvious
benifit
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benefits
benefit
 for
persioners
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pensioners
prisoners
, but the upside for society
are
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 a bit less certain.
To begin
 with,
beacause
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because
 of modern medical equipment,
people
 nowadays not only live longer but live
healthier
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a healthier
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life
, too. Fewer
people
 die young of communicable diseases due to the fact that there are many drugs as treatment methods to prevent
such
 symptoms.
Furthermore
, current medical science entails better qualifications for doctors.
Consequently
,
this
 leads to that the
life
 of the bulk of older
people
are
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also
 enhanced effectively.
The
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 longer
life
, in
positive
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a positive
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 way, helps us to enjoy and explore the world more than shorter. Notwithstanding the benefit listed above, there are still many
risk
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 of
the
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modern medicine. More
people
 living longer is considered that a larger fraction of society is made up of an ageing population. If
many
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any
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 of these
people
 are past retirement age, that means they are not significantly making a contribution to
national
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the national
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 economy.
In addition
, the longer
people
 live, the more resources they use, and society must conceive of ways to supply for their needs. To summarize,
therefore
, allopathic medicine
have
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 its advantages
also
 disadvantages.
However
, in my opinion,
the
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 longer
life
 is always
thing
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the thing
a thing
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 that all of us are looking towards.
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