Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action.

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Nowadays, a lot of
people
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suppose that
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problems
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could not
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by
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person
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. Others think that the
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cannot solve
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problems
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without
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’s help.
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essay agrees that
one
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person
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cannot solve a huge
ecology
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problem
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, but they could make a big contribution to solving
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problem
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. On the
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hand,
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person
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cannot handle
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ecology
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problem
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alone.
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, there are not many
people
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who have the opportunity to deal with
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problems
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most of
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time.
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,
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human can make a team of
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, who want to solve environmental
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and make
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better.
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, man could ask for money from the
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or the nature protection fund to solve the environmental
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. In my opinion, it is impossible to solve
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ecology
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the ecology
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problem
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alone, but everyone always can make
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better.
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, the
government
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cannot deal with a huge environmental
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without
people
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’s help.
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, everyone can inform the
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about an environmental
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in their town or village.
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, there are a lot of
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, who work as volunteers and want to solve environmental
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example
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global warming,
pollutions
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pollution
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or deforestation. In my viewpoint,
people
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must inform the
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about
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ecology
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problems
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. If
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government
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the government
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will know more about
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an environmental
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problem
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, they would struggle with t environmental
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better. All in all, a
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cannot solve a global environmental
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alone, but
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always can report it to the
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and struggle with environmental
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would be more productive
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