Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action.

Nowadays, a lot of
people
suppose that
environment
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problems
could not
be solve
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by
one
person
. Others think that the
government
cannot solve
environment
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problems
without
people
’s help.
This
essay agrees that
one
person
cannot solve a huge
ecology
problem
, but they could make a big contribution to solving
this
problem
. On the
one
hand,
one
person
cannot handle
ecology
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the ecology
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problem
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problems
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alone.
Moreover
, there are not many
people
who have the opportunity to deal with
environment
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problems
most of
their
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time.
However
,
one
human can make a team of
people
, who want to solve environmental
problems
and make
ecology
better.
Besides
, man could ask for money from the
government
or the nature protection fund to solve the environmental
problems
. In my opinion, it is impossible to solve
ecology
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problem
alone, but everyone always can make
ecology
better.
On the other hand
, the
government
cannot deal with a huge environmental
problem
without
people
’s help.
However
, everyone can inform the
government
about an environmental
problem
in their town or village.
Moreover
, there are a lot of
people
, who work as volunteers and want to solve environmental
problems
,
for
example
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global warming,
pollutions
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pollution
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or deforestation. In my viewpoint,
people
must inform the
government
about
ecology
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problems
. If
government
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the government
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will know more about
environmental
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an environmental
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problem
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problems
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, they would struggle with t environmental
problems
better. All in all, a
person
cannot solve a global environmental
problem
alone, but
them
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they
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always can report it to the
government
and struggle with environmental
problems
would be more productive
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