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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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In
this
 modern era, there are a lot of businessmen putting creativity into their projects like advertisements, picturesque buildings, great waiters, and so on for the reason that many consumers will come to feel enjoyable things in their companies. A penny of the great thoughts is to put up the base of the incredible scheme on
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 on their buildings,
for instance
, offices, food stalls, hospitals, and campuses. There are a lot of unique buildings in today's era enjoyed by many
people
 who feel fascinating and engrossing even though the products are more expensive. Some researchers are giving evidence to prove the circumstances. Professor Allen from Harvard University (Faculty of Design) said, "Based on my research on city dwellers given questioners about their building's
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 orientation, they prefer to choose bright
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 rather than dark
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 seeing as the brights will give them a spirit and
energy
". Based on the spirit and
energy
 talked by
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 Allen,
Mr.
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 Asman from Hassanuddin University (A psychologist) support those statements seeing as time goes by, from 1 AD until nowadays,
people
 tend to choose bright rather than dark. Bright
color
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 can build spirits in someone, and it can be beneficial for one's health and work capacity. To prove that, the blue
color
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, tend to a natural scheme like a sea. It could decrease stress on workers because the blue
color
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 will appear wonderful
energy
 like we are truly enjoying swimming on freshwater, even though we are on working. Another one with black, many
people
 can not enjoy the
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 taste as black is dark and has less
energy
. Many researchers
also
 prove that, but actually it depends on
people
 seeing as certain ones tend to use one's because they have a reason for that way.

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