These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are several

countries

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are under-development, they have lower standards as compared to developing and developed nations. The movement from developing

countries

to developed nations has become a controversial issue. There are several repercussions of moving out along with the benefits.

However

, for the sake

personal

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development settling in wealthy

countries

is beneficial and its advantages overweigh its negatives. The several positive

outcome

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of moving out strikes to my mind are

good

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education, advanced medical health facilities and expedition opportunities. Developed

countries

have better systems managed by

government

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the government

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which give options to people to study in

advanced

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education system and apply that knowledge to

workspace

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the workspace

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. To access these facilities people prefer to move out of their birthplaces.

Moreover

, employment is

the

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another reason, some teenagers study in their own country but get the better opportunities of work out of state,

therefore

they move.

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, people get disconnected from their roots and have to live away from their

family

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families

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for the betterment of their future. To meet the standards of living with

rich

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the rich

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they leave the comfort of their home.

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, a survey was conducted in Australia to examine the population from overseas who moved permanently which showed that half of them moved alone for employment opportunities. In conclusion,

although

home sickness

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homesickness

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is a factor

which

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deter

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deters

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a person to leave home

but

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the benefits and perks in wealthy nations attract students and adults.

Better

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lifestyle makes

the

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living away from family advantageous,

thus

the negatives are overlooked.