Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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life
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travelling is play a very crucial role because it helps us to enjoy our life. Some people think that the best way
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travelling is considered to be with
tour
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a tour
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guide
instead
of alone. I agree with
this
statement. There are some reasons why
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a group
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of
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friends
need while travelling.
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the
first
and foremost reason is that
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guide
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us to show that places which we do not have
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an idea
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about them.
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,
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the tour
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guide
has good knowledge regarding
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the history
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of that place. So,
one
can get
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broaden
broken
their horizon while travelling.
Furthermore
, with
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a group
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one
can enjoy
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as compared to alone because with
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friends
they can take pictures as
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memories and they can eat together as well as if during travelling
one
person feel under the weather
then
their
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friends
can help them. In conclusion, even though
one
person can travel but without
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friends
and
tour
guide
he can not enjoy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational
  • logistics
  • convenience
  • exclusive experiences
  • safety and security
  • spontaneous adventures
  • historical sites
  • cultural practices
  • landmarks
  • insights
  • socialization
  • lifelong friendships
  • restrictive
  • authentic experiences
  • skip-the-line
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