Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

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While some prefer to discover absolutely new opportunities for their leisure or spending free
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, others do not even try to do something unique in their daily
life
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. From my point of view, discovering new challenges for yourself is a really good opportunity, but meanwhile staying with your usual habits is normal too. It is clear that there are numerous advantages
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trying something new.
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, it can broaden your horizons significantly by studying
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world.
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,
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, who dedicate their
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discover
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world's sides have big amount of knowledge about various events.
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but not least, during
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opportunity of trying something new or having a variety of meals, an individual can improve his
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, by finding leisure activity which is liked by him. On the other side, we have
people
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who do not imagine their
life
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with something unique even it is a new type of delicious meal or an adventurous place. They say that these kinds of humans do not need changes in their
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so they already have everything they need. As far as I am concerned, who thinks so have a little problem - lack of imagination or simple laziness.
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, we do not need to forget a bunch of
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who do not have
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to discover unique places or
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themselves with new activities.
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, there are individuals who could not afford to spend
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for leisure. It means CEO of transatlantic corporations
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as Apple, Google, Meta, Tesla or Microsoft.
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category of
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have
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a big number of duties that create
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lack
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time
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.
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, our world has a huge amount of
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who scare of even thinking about changing something in their lives. To conclude, despite the fact that we have different advantages by
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, sightseeing or having a foreign meal, there are some
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who stay where they are.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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