Nuclear power is far too dangerous. Therefore, countries should ban its use and concentrate instead on developing alternative sources of energy such as hydroelectric power, wind power, and solar energy.

Radioactive materials, present in nuclear

energy

are a matter of serious concern. It is harmful, not to

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but

also

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, which results in the ban of

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nuclear

power

by many developing countries. Whereas, sustainable

energy

is nowadays considered to be an alternative

source

of

energy

. Some people, remember the devastating effects of nuclear

energy

.

For example

, during the year 1945, Hiroshima and Nagasaki experienced

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outcome

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nuclear

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in the form of atomic bombs. The waste of radioactive elements remains for a thousand

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years. It causes lung cancer and other cardiovascular diseases in humans. Many people consider the impacts of nuclear

power

as a zero-emission, clean and reliable

source

of

energy

. If nuclear

energy

is stored, transported and

disposed

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carefully can be a huge advantage to humans.

For instance

, nuclear

power

helps to keep the air clean by removing harmful air pollutant that contributes to acid rain and smog. It produces a massive amount of carbon-free

energy

, which is used to generate electricity on a small amount of land compared to any other

source

of

energy

.

In contrast

, an alternative

source

of

energy

is expensive, especially for developing countries. Alternative sources of

energy

such

as solar

energy

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a large area which will impact human and wildlife habitat. Hydroelectric

power

tends to

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the water quality and

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biodiversity loss. In conclusion, having considered the positive and negative impacts of nuclear

power

, I propose that nuclear

power

has huge impacts on humans as well as the environment and with proper

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it can be the future trustworthy

energy

source

.