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Nuclear power is far too dangerous. Therefore, countries should ban its use and concentrate instead on developing alternative sources of energy such as hydroelectric power, wind power, and solar energy.

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Radioactive materials, present in nuclear
energy
 are a matter of serious concern. It is harmful, not to
environment
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 but
also
 to
human
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a human
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being
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, which results in the ban of
the
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nuclear
power
 by many developing countries. Whereas, sustainable
energy
 is nowadays considered to be an alternative
source
 of
energy
. Some people, remember the devastating effects of nuclear
energy
.
For example
, during the year 1945, Hiroshima and Nagasaki experienced
terrible
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outcome
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 of
the
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nuclear
power
 in the form of atomic bombs. The waste of radioactive elements remains for a thousand
of
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years. It causes lung cancer and other cardiovascular diseases in humans. Many people consider the impacts of nuclear
power
 as a zero-emission, clean and reliable
source
 of
energy
. If nuclear
energy
 is stored, transported and
disposed
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 carefully can be a huge advantage to humans.
For instance
, nuclear
power
 helps to keep the air clean by removing harmful air pollutant that contributes to acid rain and smog. It produces a massive amount of carbon-free
energy
, which is used to generate electricity on a small amount of land compared to any other
source
 of
energy
.
In contrast
, an alternative
source
 of
energy
 is expensive, especially for developing countries. Alternative sources of
energy
such
 as solar
energy
requires
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 a large area which will impact human and wildlife habitat. Hydroelectric
power
 tends to
detoriate
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deteriorate
 the water quality and
creates
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 biodiversity loss. In conclusion, having considered the positive and negative impacts of nuclear
power
, I propose that nuclear
power
 has huge impacts on humans as well as the environment and with proper
care
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 it can be the future trustworthy
energy
source
.
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