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In order to change their appearance people often turn to plastic surgery. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such an approach.

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Some
people
 argue that
plastic
surgery
 will alter their appearance quickly.
Plastic
surgery
 allows
people
 who do not like their appearance to get what they want easily,
for
example
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 they can alter the shape of lips, make their eyes bigger, or even make the body taller than before.
Although
 the
procedure
 of
plastic
surgery
 charges a high price, a
lot
 of
people
 do it every year.
Besides
 it, the beauty standard of certain countries makes
this
procedure
 becomes popular and common over the years.
However
, with a bunch of good things
that
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stated, I still do not agree with the
procedure
 of
surgery
 personally. According to my opinion,
this
procedure
 gain a
lot
 of disadvantages,
such
 as the
result
 might be worse than
it
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expected and a
lot
 of bad side-effects after
surgery
 might happen. Here is the explanation :
First
, there is always the possibility that
plastic
surgery
result
 is not the same as the expectation. As I know, the
procedure
 of
surgery
 will be done by expert doctors, even they have trained for many years, the human error might happen.
Second
, when a tissue of the human body was dissected, other tissue might be affected.
Thus
, bad treatment can
result
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 the complication to the body.
Also
, the
people
 who had
surgery
 must pay attention a
lot
 to the part that gets
surgery
, they should keep it hygiene and take care of it carefully. I can say that rather than doing
plastic
surgery
, they can prefer to do face-yoga to change their face, or if they want to get taller than before, they can try jumping every day. The tutorial of face yoga or another exercise can be accessed easily on the youtube platform. Even though the
result
 will take a long period of time, the bad effect of
this
 action is very little compared with
plastic
surgery
 procedures.

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