Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
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expenditure for budgeting in public Use synonyms
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instead
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sector
, which is wasting a budget plan. Use synonyms
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government
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service
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nevertheless
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government
must not overlook the Use synonyms
sector
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art
due to a society's need to enjoy entertainment and attraction.
The significance of investing in the Use synonyms
art
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sector
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such
as music and theatre by the Linking Words
government
is entertaining, educating and attracting the society, on top of that, they can get a higher profit through Use synonyms
art
activities. Use synonyms
For instance
, the local people and tourists get entertainment and new insight into Indonesian culture through a Gambang Kromong music concert. Linking Words
Moreover
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government
can make a profit and benefit from its event and Use synonyms
also
can allocate the money into the other sectors.
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However
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government
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service
areas as a priority. When the public Use synonyms
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service
in several aspects of social life, it will increase public trust and convenience towards the Use synonyms
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also
making the society live in the welfare. Linking Words
For example
, the Linking Words
government
allocates more of a budget for an educational institution, particularly in educational instruments and teachers’ salaries. Use synonyms
As a result
, the students’ output will attain the maximum of competency and gain the highest score.
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although
budgeting the money in the Linking Words
Art
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sector
gain more beneficial through music concert or theatre, the Use synonyms
sector
of public Use synonyms
service
is most important to become a priority of the budgeting for increasing the public trust and convenience.Use synonyms
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